Monday, January 5, 2009

Forward progress


Your comments have been great. Not just because you're saying such lovely things, like you know my book will be good, yaddayaddayadda. But because you really understand the conundrum I posted, and you all had very sound and sensible solutions, except for Lali, who thinks I should model myself after Norman Mailer.


(OK, that's not really what she said.)

Anyway, you'll be happy to know that, so far so good. First of all, after digging seriously back into Hack after weeks of sort of desultory poking around, I realized that Chapter Seven is actually pretty much done, in a first-draft kind of way, and I had made more forward progress into Chapter Eight than I had recalled.

So that was encouraging. (Either that, or Riley and Boscoe have been getting on the laptop in my absence, trying to help me out.)

And second of all, I have been tamping down my feelings of guilt and sitting, butt in chair, laptop on lap, writing, while Doug (a) took down the tree (b) put away all the ornaments (c) cleaned the basement (d) did the grocery shopping (e) walked the dogs (f) took the dogs to the vet and (g) visited his mother.

When he came back from visiting his mother I considered raising a languid hand and saying, "Dahling, mix me a drink, I'm fah too fatigued to do it mahself," but then I thought that might be taking things a bit too far, so, instead, I made dinner.

But I got a lot done, over the weekend and this morning. Hours of good, if not completely steady, work. I dug out old clips from Russia that I had been meaning to find for, oh, four months or so, and I re-read them, trying not to cringe at my 1986 prose, and I rewrote sections of all seven chapters, and I pushed forward into chapter eight by another three or four pages.

It is January, and the cold keeps me happy to be hunkered down, writing. I know that when March rolls around, and the crocuses push their little violet heads through the soil, and the cardinals start nesting, and the light comes earlier and stays later, I'll have a whole new set of temptations to wrestle with. So the time to write is now. And thanks to you, and thanks to Doug, I am.

Maybe I'll post a little new section here for you, see what you think.... stay tuned. Oh, and the picture? Guv and me. I figured he'd be proud. He was a writer, too, you know.

22 comments:

Dumdad said...

I've just caught up with these last two posts. Sometimes you need to write out your fears and concerns before tackling them. You've done that. You've got a lot of work ahead but I know you'll succeed. And I look forward to buying the finished masterpiece; then watching all your TV and magazine interviews etc etc.

Pondside said...

Way to go! If you go on in the New Year as you've started out you'll be doing the talk-show, book-signing circuit in no time!!! I look forward to hearing you read in Victoria!

Indigo Bunting said...

Great photo, dahling, and oh it must feel good to see some progress! Progress often leads to more progress!

Patience-please said...

There you go!

laurie said...

pondside, no way am i going to victoria. too snowy!!!! hahahaha

Lane said...

I love that photo.

Glad you've reconciled your modest side with your practical side. Your readers give great advice:-)

DogLover said...

I meant to say the other day - I love that new masthead with Boscoe pawing the ground so elegantly!

Eulalia (Lali) said...

Blessings be upon your Doug! He sounds like an ideal spouse for a writer, and it would be a shame to let his talents go to waste.

Babaloo said...

Way to go! Baby steps... :)

And the image of you sitting in the chair, asking Doug for a drink? Priceless. Would've liked to see his face if you'd really done that. :)

Coffee with Cathy said...

Laurie -- Thanks so much for stopping by my blog. And now please tell how a banana saved your life!

Kaycie said...

Doug is a jewel of a man.

Good for you, working through like that. I can't wait for a snippet to read.

Guv is proud. No doubt.

Wisewebwoman said...

Well done you!
You really inspire me, Laurie. I asked myself what is the most important aspiration in your life and it was writing and I'm committing to the workshop to get this novel done!!
And oh I love the lollygagging on the chair with an exhausted wave of the wrist as Doug scurries in from his 100th task of the day!!
And a youthful Guv!
Lovely pic.
He is starlight beaming.
XO
WWW

laurie said...

doug is deeply embarrassed by all your praise. says he's just doing what he's supposed to do, nothing more.

but i am tickled that you all see him through my eyes.

WT said...

I'm reading posts out of sequence, so I haven't read the one where I should have been supportive yet, but if I had I would have been. Ah, who am I kidding, you know me too well for that bullshit. But if you do finish it, I'd love a signed copy, books are way too expensive for me to buy over here.

Andrea said...

Doug is a prince among men!! Love your sense of humor! I will eagerly await a snippet or two!! :)

Gail said...

I admire your perseverance and your writing style.
I saw a friend from school several years ago. We talked and he asked if I was writing. He said I had visions of you drowning in manuscripts by now. I, sadly, do not write much.
You must order a few extra copies for your blog friends. I am sure we will all buy one.
Keep on!

Amy said...

Sounds like it's your time to be selfish. Doug is amazing for supporting you in it. Looking forward to the finished product.

Jim said...

Wow, that's great! And kudos to Doug, of course, for being a great husband.

Far Side of Fifty said...

Behind every great woman there is a supportive and fantastic man! Way to go Doug! :)

my two cents said...

He had to be proud of you then, gosh you were cute, and I am sure he would be proud of you now, too.

If you won't go to Victoria will you come to Southern California?

laurie said...

aw, WT, you're so sentimental.

and my two cents, i'd love to go to southern california, especially in, say, February.

this is just a regional publisher, though. i'll be lucky if they pay my way to duluth.

ped crossing said...

Yeah for progress!